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[edit]Message added 02:28, 25 January 2011 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.
Request for Mentorship
[edit]Hi, Tommy. I'm happy to accept your request. It's worth noting that I'm five hours ahead of you, so don't panic if you don't always get an instant reply. Having said that, I'm editing Wikipedia quite a lot most days, plus I'm a bit of a night owl and am usually still around at 1am my time (8pm Eastern) and sometimes later still.
One thing: when putting messages or comments on Talk pages (either User talk pages like mine or Article talk pages), you need to add your Wikipedia User name (signature) at the end of your post (rather than leaving it to SineBot to do that - see your message on my Talk page). The easy way to add your User name is to click the fifth symbol from the left at the top of the editing box - it's a picture of a pen writing something, just before the "Advanced" link. Sometimes it gets put in the wrong place rather than at the end - some sort of bug - but if so you can cut and paste it in at the end. Or you can type two dashes and four tildes (--~~~~) to produce the same result. Thus my signature will appear at the end of this. Best wishes, and I look forward to hearing from you. Andrew, alias --GuillaumeTell 22:52, 31 January 2011 (UTC)
Great -- I'm looking forward to working with you. Thanks a bunch.
--CadillacDB23 (talk) 20:38, 2 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello, again. I had a look at your contributions to the above. Two things:
- In the Types of policies section, I'd recommend using bullet-points such as I'm using below here, to make the list more easy to read
- I'm afraid that neither of your two refs actually goes to where you wanted - click the blue links in the bullet-points below, which I've copied from the article, and see where you get to:
See if you can get to the correct pages by trial and error. I recommend using the "Show preview" button down below the editing box. Get back to me if nothing seems to work and I'll show you what to do.
You can also pretend to edit my comments here to see how I've organised this post. I'm going to press the Show preview button now to see how it looks, and then clicking the blue-linked ref text ... and I made some changes and am now satisfied that this looks OK, so I'll totter off to bed. --GuillaumeTell 00:50, 18 February 2011 (UTC)
I went ahead and fixed the two sources you mentioned and reorganized the page using bullet points as you suggested. Please let me know what you think.
--CadillacDB23 (talk) 20:38, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
- Sorry to be slow replying (I went to London to see Anna Nicole yesterday and just got back). I started this with a colon, which indents my comments. Up above, you could have done the same to avoid repeating the heading. If you reply to this, use two colons for another indent and so on. If the space to the left starts getting ludicrously large, then you can outdent by starting at the beginning of the next line with no colons.
- Anyway, you've fixed ref #2 so that it looks a lot better in the article and gets to the right place, but using a Google search and getting an html result means that the text has a rather gaudy and (to my mind) rather offputting colour-scheme. Here's what I'd have done: because you know the exact title of the article, put "A New Agricultural Policy for the United States" - the quotation marks are very important - into Google, and your #1 hit will be that very document in PDF format. Click the link and there it is. Now click the document's alarming-looking URL with all the 20s and %s up at the top of the page, do a CTRL-C to copy it, and then use it as the basis for the ref in the same way that you did for the gaudy Google one. If you get that right, a little PDF symbol will appear in the ref. Broadly speaking, PDFs are neater than html text and better for printing, etc.
- Now for ref #1. The problem there is that all it does is just take you to the Almanac of Policy Issues home page. What I'd suggest, now that you've done the bullets, is, for each bullet, to go beyond that home page and put a different ref at the end. So, from the Almanac of Policy page, click Criminal Justice, capture the resulting URL as above and use that as a link at the end of the first bullet point.
- Actually, given that Death Penalty, Drugs and Gun Control all have their own links on that page, you could click each of those and use all the resulting three pages as different refs on that same line, like so:
- Criminal Justice -- death penalty,(insert ref here) drug policy,(ref here) and gun control(ref here)
- Actually, given that Death Penalty, Drugs and Gun Control all have their own links on that page, you could click each of those and use all the resulting three pages as different refs on that same line, like so:
- That could look like overkill, of course, but it does enable interested users to get to the actual policies faster. See how it looks, and if you're not sure, get a second opinion from Prof Allen or classmates or other ambassadors or whoever.
- Hope I haven't confused you! Best. --
GuillaumeTell 23:09, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
Sorry for the delayed response -- I was on Spring Break. I'm working on adding the references as you suggested. I think doing so will make the article much stronger.
--CadillacDB23 (talk) 16:33, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
-- Howdy Cadallac, We are peer-reviewing and copy editing your wikipedia project in class. I didn't want to copy edit your quote that starts the Agriculture section, but I feel like you could find a quote that wasn't so poorly written. Maybe just re-write the quote in a way where the verbs agree? I don't know.
Also, I don't think "respective" means what you think it means.
In the energy section, I find the Random Capitalization of words off-putting.
Anyway, nice work. Much better than mine. -Cheers. -- pattessmTell 3:50, 16 March 2011 (UTC)
Hello Pattessm,
I'm glad to hear that you'll be editing my project. I'm currently working on fixing the references on the page, but I will address your suggestions during the next or two.
--CadillacDB23 (talk) 16:36, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
GOCE drive newsletter
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[edit]Invitation from the Guild of Copy Editors The Guild of Copy Editors invites you to participate in their November 2011 Backlog elimination drive, a month-long effort to reduce the size of the copy edit backlog. The drive begins on November 1 at 00:00 (UTC) and ends on November 30 at 23:59 (UTC). We will be tracking the number of 2010 articles (and specifically will be targeting the oldest three months), as we want to copy edit as many of these as possible. Barnstars will be awarded to anyone who copy edits more than 4,000 words, and special awards will be given to the top 5 in the following categories: "Number of articles", "Number of words", and "Number of articles of over 5,000 words". We hope to see you there! – Your drive coordinators: Diannaa, Chaosdruid, The Utahraptor, Slon02, and SMasters. |
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GOCE March copy edit drive
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GOCE March drive newsletter
[edit] Guild of Copy Editors March 2012 backlog elimination drive update Greetings from the Guild of Copy Editors March 2012 Backlog elimination drive! Here's the mid-drive newsletter. Participation: We have had 58 people sign up for this drive so far, which compares favorably with our last drive, and 27 have copy-edited at least one article. If you have signed up but have not yet copy-edited any articles, please consider doing so. Every bit helps! If you haven't signed up yet, it's not too late. Join us! Progress report: Our target of completing the 2010 articles has almost been reached, with only 56 remaining of the 194 we had at the start of the drive. The last ones are always the most difficult, so thank you if you are able to help copy-edit any of the remaining articles. We have reduced the total backlog by 163 articles so far. Special thanks: Special thanks to Stfg, who has been going through the backlog and doing some preliminary vetting of the articles—removing copyright violations, doing initial clean-up, and nominating some for deletion. This work has helped make the drive a more pleasant experience for all our volunteers. Your drive coordinators – Dianna (talk), Stfg (talk), and Dank (talk)To discontinue receiving GOCE newsletters, please remove your name from our mailing list. |
GOCE March drive wrap-up
[edit] Guild of Copy Editors March 2012 backlog elimination drive Greetings from the Guild of Copy Editors March 2012 Backlog elimination drive! This is the most successful drive we have had for quite a while. Here is your end-of-drive wrap-up newsletter. Participation Of the 70 people who signed up for this drive, 40 copy-edited at least one article. Thanks to all who participated! Special acknowledgement goes out to Lfstevens, who did over 200 articles, most of them in the last third of the drive, and topped all three leaderboard categories. You're a superstar! Stfg and others have been pre-checking the articles for quality and conformance to Wikipedia guidelines; some have been nominated for deletion or had some preliminary clean-up done to help make the copy-edit process more fun and appealing. Thanks to all who helped get those nasty last few articles out of the target months. Progress report During this drive we were successful in eliminating our target months—October, November, and December 2010—from the queue, and have now eliminated all the 2010 articles from our list. We were able to complete 500 articles this month! End-of-drive results and barnstar information can be found here. When working on the backlog, please keep in mind that there are options other than copy-editing available; some articles may be candidates for deletion, or may not be suitable for copy-editing at this time for other reasons. The {{GOCEreviewed}} tag can be placed on any article you find to be totally uneditable, and you can nominate for deletion any that you discover to be copyright violations or completely unintelligible. If you need help deciding what to do, please contact any of the coordinators. Thank you for participating in the March 2012 drive! All contributions are appreciated. Our next copy-edit drive will be in May. Your drive coordinators – Dianna (Talk), Stfg (Talk), and Dank (talk)To discontinue receiving GOCE newsletters, please remove your name from our mailing list. |
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GOCE May mid-drive newsletter
[edit]Guild of Copy Editors May 2012 backlog elimination drive mid-drive newsletter Participation: Out of 49 people signed up for this drive so far, 26 have copy-edited at least one article. It's a smaller group than last drive, but we're making good progress. If you've signed up but haven't yet copy-edited any articles, please consider doing so. Every bit helps! If you haven't signed up yet, it's not too late. Join us! Progress report: We're on track to meet our targets for the drive, largely due to the efforts of Lfstevens and the others on the leaderboard. Thanks to all. We have reduced our target group of articles—January, February, and March 2011—by over half, and it looks like we will achieve that goal. Good progress is being made on the overall backlog as well, with over 500 articles copy-edited during the drive so far. The total backlog currently sits at around 3200 articles. Hall of Fame: GOCE coordinator Diannaa was awarded a spot in the GOCE Hall of Fame this month! She has copy-edited over 1567 articles during these drives, and surpassed the 1,000,000-word mark on May 5. On to the second million! – Your drive coordinators: Dank, Diannaa and Stfg >>> Sign up now <<< To discontinue receiving GOCE newsletters, please remove your name from our mailing list. Newsletter delivered by EdwardsBot (talk) 14:17, 15 May 2012 (UTC) |
GOCE May drive wrap-up
[edit]Guild of Copy Editors May 2012 backlog elimination drive wrap-up Participation: Out of 54 people who signed up this drive, 32 copy-edited at least one article. Last drive's superstar, Lfstevens, again stood out, topping the leader board in all three categories and copy-editing over 700 articles. Thanks to all who participated! Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here. Progress report: We were once again successful in our primary goal—removing the oldest three months from the backlog—while removing 1166 articles from the queue, the second-most in our history. The total backlog currently sits at around 2600 articles, down from 8323 when we started out just over two years ago. Coodinator election: The six-month term for our third tranche of Guild coordinators will be expiring at the end of June. We will be accepting nominations for the fourth tranche of coordinators, who will also serve a six-month term. Nominations will open starting on June 5. For complete information, please have a look at the election page. – Your drive coordinators: Dank, Diannaa, and Stfg To discontinue receiving GOCE newsletters, please remove your name from our mailing list. Newsletter delivered by EdwardsBot (talk) 15:19, 3 June 2012 (UTC) |
GOCE July 2012 Copy Edit Drive
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GOCE July 2012 mid-drive newsletter
[edit]Guild of Copy Editors July 2012 backlog elimination drive mid-drive newsletter Participation: Out of 37 people signed up for this drive so far, 25 have copy-edited at least one article. It's a smaller group than last drive, but we're making good progress. If you've signed up but haven't yet copy-edited any articles, every bit helps; if you haven't signed up yet, it's not too late. Join us! Progress report: We're almost on track to meet our targets for the drive. Great work, guys. We have reduced our target group of articles—May, June, and July 2011—by about 40%, and the overall backlog has been reduced by 264 articles so far, to around 2500 articles. Copy Edit of the Month: Starting in August, your best copy-editing work of the month will be eligible for fabulous prizes! See here for details. – Your drive coordinators: Stfg, Allens, and Torchiest. >>> Sign up now <<< To discontinue receiving GOCE newsletters, please remove your name from our mailing list. Newsletter delivered by EdwardsBot (talk) 16:26, 15 July 2012 (UTC) |
GOCE July drive wrap-up
[edit]Guild of Copy Editors July 2012 backlog elimination drive wrap-up Participation: Out of 45 people who signed up this drive, 31 have copy-edited at least one article. Lfstevens continues to carry most of the weight, having edited 360 articles and over a quarter of a million words already. Thanks to all who have participated! Final results, including barnstars awarded, will be available early in August here. Progress report: We are once again very close to achieving in our primary goal—removing the oldest three months from the backlog. Only 35 such articles remain at press time. The total backlog currently sits at under 2400 articles, down from 8323 when we started out over two years ago. We are just two articles away from completing all requests made before July 2012 (both are in progress). Copy Edit of the Month: Starting in August, you'll be able to submit your best copy-editing work for palaver, praise, and prizes. See here for details. – Your drive coordinators: Stfg, Allens, and Torchiest. To discontinue receiving GOCE newsletters, please remove your name from our mailing list. Newsletter delivered by EdwardsBot (talk) 23:51, 27 July 2012 (UTC) |
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GOCE September 2012 drive wrap-up
[edit]Guild of Copy Editors September 2012 backlog elimination drive wrap-up Participation: Out of 41 people who signed up this drive, 28 copy-edited at least one article. Thanks to all who participated! Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here. Progress report: We achieved our primary goal of clearing July, August, September and October 2011 from the backlog. This means that, for the first time since the drives began, the backlog is less than a year. At least 677 tagged articles were copy edited, although 365 new ones were added during the month. The total backlog at the end of the month was 2341 articles, down from 8323 when we started out over two years ago. We completed all 54 requests outstanding before September 2012 as well as eight of those made in September. Copy Edit of the Month: Voting is now over for the August 2012 competition, and prizes will be issued soon. The September 2012 contest is closed for submissions and open for voting. The October 2012 contest is now open for submissions. Everyone is welcome to submit entries and to vote. – Your drive coordinators: Stfg, Allens, and Torchiest. To discontinue receiving GOCE newsletters, please remove your name from our mailing list. Newsletter delivered by EdwardsBot (talk) 23:30, 4 October 2012 (UTC) |
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[edit]Guild of Copy Editors November 2012 backlog elimination drive mid-drive newsletter
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GOCE November drive wrap-up
[edit]Guild of Copy Editors November 2012 backlog elimination drive wrap-up Participation: Thanks to all who participated! Out of 38 people who signed up this drive, 33 copy-edited at least one article. Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here. All the barnstars have now been distributed. Progress report: We achieved our primary goal of clearing November and December 2011 from the backlog. For the first time since the drives began, the backlog consists only of articles tagged in the current year. The total backlog at the end of the month was 2690 articles, down from 8323 when we started out over two years ago. We completed all 56 requests outstanding before November 2012 as well as eight of those made in November. Copy Edit of the Month: Voting is now over for the October 2012 competition, and prizes have been issued. The November 2012 contest is closed for submissions and open for voting. The December 2012 contest is now open for submissions. Everyone is welcome to submit entries and to vote. Coodinator election: The six-month term for our fourth tranche of Guild coordinators will expire at the end of December. Nominations are open for the fifth tranche of coordinators, who will serve from 1 January to 30 June 2013. For complete information, please have a look at the election page. – Your drive coordinators: Stfg, Allens, and Torchiest. To discontinue receiving GOCE newsletters, please remove your name from our mailing list. Newsletter delivered by EdwardsBot (talk) 20:41, 3 December 2012 (UTC) |