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Hi,@Qcne

I have read the criera and understood TOI . Thanks for information it will help me for upcoming my drafts. I have remove the TOI Ref and others are making it notable . when u have time kindly review it Draft:Bhavya Trikha Monhiroe (talk) 12:05, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

hI KIND REMINDER Monhiroe (talk) 17:08, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It was accepted, @Monhiroe? Qcne (talk) 17:38, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

i have moved the page. Can u please review that as per criteria. any changes needed? Monhiroe (talk) 17:39, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

We don't review pages that have already been moved to mainspace. You have the right to move drafts to mainspace but that bypasses the review process. Qcne (talk) 17:47, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

thanks @Qcne for your reply Monhiroe (talk) 17:51, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, could you please help me with an article I'm trying to get published, what would you say are the short comings and how could I improve on them Jainplaw (talk) 05:31, 16 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

There is simply no indication she is notable, @Jainplaw. Check WP:42 for what we require in sources. Qcne (talk) 20:05, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Could you please tell me how do I make the article notable? Jainplaw (talk) 04:44, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jainplaw you can't make a subject notable: notability comes from significant coverage in multiple independent, reliable, sources such as newspapers or magazines or books or journals. Qcne (talk) 08:34, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have mentioned 16 reference which are from independent, reliable sources from new papers and other website. Could you point out what are the mistakes if any in my referencing. Would adding more references from other sources be sufficient to get the article approved? Jainplaw (talk) 06:42, 25 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Quick question, how did you make all of those references on the Plana School article fit on one reference line? I was messing around with that and could not figure it out. Wabbit98 (talk) 17:57, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey @Wabbit98. Using the Visual Editor you can re-use references and fill in bare URLs, follow this tutorial: WP:INTREFVE. Qcne (talk) 08:08, 23 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi can accept ordecline a draft about dick Beetham 72.81.139.147 (talk) 23:38, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there. You offered to help review my submission before I resubmitted it. I'm ready to do that, I'm just not really sure how to do that. Do I copy and paste the source in a message to you?

Thank you. Tallstop99 (talk) 17:59, 23 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Tallstop99 Hi! If you click Publish Changes on your text it'll update the draft, which is akin to Save in a word processor. This doesn't publish to the review queue.

Then just link the draft, and I'll have a look in a few hours. Qcne (talk) 18:59, 23 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Great, thanks. Here you go: Draft:Jim Rumph Tallstop99 (talk) 19:33, 23 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Tallstop99, better but still not quite.

The tone is still inappropriate. Are you using ChatGPT to write this? It sounds like the sort of stuff ChatGPT outputs. It really needs re-writing from scratch to remove all non-neutral language. Examples include..

"characterized by a whimsical and imaginative style"

"reflecting his complex family history."

"renowned works showcased intricate, fantastical designs"

"became a hub of creativity and innovation"

"was as colorful as his art"

"Jim Rumph's art remains a testament to his creative genius and his ability to bring humor and imagination to life through ceramics"

Some more issues:

- please remove the external links from the Legacy section. You can have an External Links section but it really should be a max of two links, whereas you have six. Either convert them into suitable in-line citations to support a sentence from the text, or remove.

- Quite a lot of your sources are offline, which is fine but makes it harder for the reviewer to verify. Any chance there are online copies of these on newspaper archives?

- Source #5 doesn't mention Rumph. I know the photo is of his ET mug but unless the source specifically states that, we cannot include it. Everything must be verified. Qcne (talk) 12:42, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the feedback.

I will work on the tone and let you know.

I have also made the other changes you suggested. As far as the offline sources, I was able to find one online version (on archive.org), but the others, I cannot. I do have physical copies of these items. Would it help if I took pictures of these items and put them on a web page so they can be verified online? Tallstop99 (talk) 18:46, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Tallstop99 Don't take photos, it would likely breach copyright. But perhaps describe them to me so I vaguely know what sort of content they are? i.e., interviews with him, do they provide him with significant coverage, etc. Qcne (talk) 18:56, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

These are the offline ones (explanation below it):

• Magid, Ron (October 1986). "An Interview With Jim Rumph". The Halloween Gazette. 1 (2): 4–8. This is an interview with Jim Rumph done in 1986 and published in this small fanzine. Significant coverage (5 double-column pages)
• "Welcome to the Slyme Factory". Cobblestone. Los Angeles. October–November 1975. p. 7. This is an article about him and his work and where it is done printed in "A newspaper of the Arts". Significant coverage (1 page double column, 9 paragraphs)
• Riley, John (May 28, 1972). "Casual Horror. The Unusual Knight. Rumph". Los Angeles Times West. Los Angeles: 14. This is a biographical article about him and his work with a few quotes in it. Significant coverage (1 large page 11x14, quadruple column, 13 paragraphs)
• Wilder, Sam (June 2007). "things that go Rumph in the night". Housetrends. 6 (3). Greater Cincinnati: 150–151. Another biographical article talking about him and his artwork. Significant coverage (2 pages)

Tallstop99 (talk) 19:32, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Do you need anymore information? Tallstop99 (talk) 16:44, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Qcne, are you still willing to assist me? Tallstop99 (talk) 19:24, 4 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Qcne! I made a new draft. Added information I found. The person is a songwriter, has some major music credits. I could not find the years or date of birth tho. Does not seem to be a very public individual, but has some major collaborations with Korean BTS, not much is written about that. So I am thinking if sources are fine. J2009j (talk) 22:39, 29 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I also have another question for my other page. It has (booking agent) added to the name. I did not add that. That page was approved as - producer. So I wanted to change that to (producer), but have no idea how to do it. Christopher McDonald (booking agent) I would appreciate your help a lot. It is not the same as changing the name, it was added by somebody else. J2009j (talk) 03:41, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Or even better would be "talent producer", because booking agent that is a completely different thing from talent booker. J2009j (talk) 04:58, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Qcne Hi! Would you please let me know how to fix this issues?We worked on this page together. It has (booking agent) added to the name. I did not add that. That page was approved as - producer. So I wanted to change that to (producer), but have no idea how to do it. Christopher McDonald (booking agent) I would appreciate your help a lot. It is not the same as changing the name, it was added by somebody else J2009j (talk) 02:59, 1 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I have had multiple conversations with you about this article and was wondering if there are any updates. Reason being is that I finish my internship with Trane this week and need to know if I can transfer the rights to this article to a different employee. Thanks Adsimmel (talk) 12:04, 31 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Adsimmel. The draft is still in the review pool, unfortunately we have many thousands of drafts waiting to be reviewed and only a small number of volunteer reviewers.

You can not transfer your Wikipedia account to the new intern/employee, this is against our terms and conditions, so please don't pass on your password to them. Just tell them to make a new Wikipedia account and to make the same paid editing disclosure you did. Any editor can edit the draft so you don't need to "transfer the rights" via any sort of formal process.

I have cleaned up some of the language (the final sentence especially was obviously written by AI and not suitable for Wikipedia), and added a couple of tags for citations.

Best of luck with your career! Qcne (talk) 17:18, 31 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

links have been added to the draft redirecting to particular article for which wikipedia article has been drafted 2409:4054:10E:9A37:0:0:11CB:88B0 (talk) 09:44, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Dear Sir, I have tried to fix some of the errors to this draft you rejected on June 24. Kindly please have a look at it now and approve it to be moved to the mains pace please. I have not been responded to the changes I have made. Draft:Russell Dalgleish Sehar Awais (talk) 21:44, 9 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]